Black Poetry : Swept Away!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the fall leaves that must be gone before winter
    snow...they must go , only to return the next day.
    You had me love jonesd, swept away!
    Like the footsteps the old lady at Mardi gras advised
    sprinkle salt if you want him to stay away behind his
    each and every step...then it must be swept away!
    Like gathering snow on a side walk that gives access
    to the warm awaiting car that will take you far...
    It must be swept away.

    Just like that my heart my mind the way I breathed
    I had been sacked and slammed by a love attack.
    Flour spilled on the floor where you prepared his
    first Fried chicken dinner , memories of sucking
    from his finger, your mind lingers...you were
    swept away. Love blurred my vision as I watched
    you walk away every time you left, I waited with
    breath baited...would you return to stay! I know
    that I am falling fast...I know what it
    means to be swept away.

    Like smooth fingers caress tears away from long lush
    eyelashes ;when I realize that we are both in love
    you wiped away, swept away the tears that day
    and made all my winter blues turn into warm
    carribbean days on the beach...scattered bits of
    sand where we lay...must be swept away!
    I know that day like I know on the last, love came
    quickly sometimes it does not last. Hearts flutter
    souls melt together like butter and our love affair
    like the salt on the walk must have gotten...
    swept
    away!
    ;)
    Bjs(C)2002
     
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    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful

    one luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alright now ya bringing dem luv vibes into a heated flow..
    very sweet & well written
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you have to find it somehow!

    I am feeling the rememebering part and that is healing me!
    Life's disappointments teach you all kinds of ways of coping ...
    me I like to come home to Destee and let my mind run free!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed let it flow coz u know i do ....I love when u come
    like dis here .
     
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    I'm feelin you
    Go head with it....
     
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