Black Poetry : Sweetly it be....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am the vibe that
    He so strongly
    holds the key…
    sweetly....
    Nothing comes close
    As my love is release
    He holds on tight….
    I have no fear
    Babe, I know your near…
    Afar on the rainbow….
    Feelin the dream we share…
    sweetly....
    As love is true…
    Many try to duplicate….
    But none compare
    I found my sure thing
    Instead of sex
    I found more of adore
    its pure and mine
    sweetly
    We got a deeper love….
    something better as
    What he holds inside
    A joy of heart
    Holdin my hand
    in my mental
    We glide across
    the galaxy…thru the
    wind and ride
    the starz
    just him and I
    sweetly
    as fine wine….
    We can never be define….
    Just get better with time…
    Purple hearts up
    Under the cherry moon
    As it rains roses of love………
    I am the vibe that
    He so strongly
    holds the key…
    Many try to duplicate….
    But none compare
    sweetly...... :flirt:



    blkangel thang...... :toast:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a wonderful piece...for a moment...I was on that plane too...to rain roses is a beautiful thing...I felt every word. very good poem...
     
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    Ok, U know what I am going to call u Emotional Smurf and im feeling all your emotions 2.. nice drop Lady.
     
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    well scribe flow da emotions was flowing sweetly
     
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    That was cool. Very sweetly done. I think I got a cavity. :D
     
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    thanks fam for the love on dis.....
     
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    most welcome wit pleasure well felt scribe too
     
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    rich glad you like it.....
    thanks....Angel