Black Poetry : Sweetheart...

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetheart

    9/4/00
    3:22am


    Sweetheart, you cool my soul…

    My oasis in the desert
    And refuge during harsh weather
    Baby, I’m only on the fourth line
    And am already in an emotional bind
    You’re my sight, my vision, my iii’s
    My purpose and guide through life

    Sweetheart…

    The syncopation in my rhythm of life
    My accented other half
    You make my iii’s fill with spirit
    And become pregnant with tears of joy
    A huge consumption of happiness
    Is wrapped all around me
    And it’s all because of you
    My sweetheart
    The cadence that keeps my heart marching on
    In a parade celebrating my soul
    Our soul---

    Sweetheart…

    My beautiful equinox
    My sunrise and sunset
    My harvest moon
    My pure rose full bloom
    I state simply
    Yet with all the power and passion I posses
    I love you...

    (c)2000
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said story. I like the way this is written. Keep up the good work.:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Aaliyah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said poet !!!! dis piece of beauty is written from within
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOH!!!! hope your feeling this way about this woman for a long , long, time....she sure does sound special..my oasis in the desert...serenading the sista with your words and all...

    lo
     
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