Black Poetry : SweetDrkOne

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Monetary, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ****…attractive AND fine.
    Oh, how I wish you were mine

    But Honey is the only fella gettin’ yo time.
    Me secretly wanting you is a punishable crime

    Shhhhhhhhhh…keep that on the hush
    …cuz every time I see you, my heart begins to rush

    My palms get sweaty and my throat gets dry
    My knees get weak and that ain’t no lie.

    With those soft, seductive eyes
    You make me melt deep inside

    That beautiful dark complexion and those luscious, soft lips
    Hell, I even get mesmerized by the curves of your hips

    But it wasn’t your sexiness that won my heart.
    It was your intelligence and wit that trapped me from the start

    Your strength and thoughtfulness makes my spirit smile
    As your love of laughter drives me wild

    Loving, caring
    Thoughtful and sharing

    The sexy you soothes my soul
    The simple you makes me whole

    The serious you keeps me in check
    The lover in you makes me an emotional wreck

    The mere thought of you makes my heart sing
    It caresses my soul…what a beautiful thing

    You’re an angel sent from heaven above
    To me, you represent nothing but sweet love

    When I needed to laugh you cracked a **** good joke
    When I needed a push, you gave me a poke

    When I needed an ear, you never said a word
    When I needed your opinion, you typed the truthful word

    When I was weak, you were my rock
    From the very beginning to this very moment on the clock

    Although I’ve thought of you many a nights in lustful sin
    I thank GOD ALMIGHTY that you’re my friend


    :heart:

    Monetary - with much love
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Wow Monetary ... sounds like she's all that and then sum !!!

    Any Sister would be honored to be thought of so warmly.

    Thanks For Sharing.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading...and responding. It's very much appreciated.
     
  4. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    monetary...i love your style. must be that Detroit thing we share. nice read. was feelin this one
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    KOKO

    Thanks....I appreciate the nice comments. :toast:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey moneyyyyyyyyyy....
    its like dat?????:lol: wow...
    nice write....Angel
     
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    mmmm..this is so smooth...loving the vibe
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...this was a beautiful warm vibe.
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe bruh
    deep dark one of love
    flow on man !!!
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWW MONEY!

    I never knew you felt that way! LOL! No seriously this was so captivatingly
    heartwarmingly beautiful and a testament to the Heart of a Poet.

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :peace: