Black Poetry : ~~~~~SweetDaddy Jazz~~~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lucine's Juke Joint...

    Hazy lights,
    hues of smooth reds, earthy blues, and
    dim whites.
    Atmosphere...laidback and full of smoke.
    I'm lost....

    Puff...

    Onstage he sits,
    Just as handsome as he can be...
    Hmmmmmmm Hmmmmph!
    Low-down sexy and smooth in a
    suit of Midnight blue pinstripes
    with a matching hat, cocked to the side.
    I'm staring into the onyx-colored eyes
    of
    SweetDaddy Jazz.

    Sweet as an apple martini with
    the potency of home-spun moonshine,
    SweetDaddy Jazz,
    Smoked Honey complexion, and sex-appeal for
    days...
    D**m! This man is fine!
    he calmly takes center stage and
    his eyes meet mine.
    I fall deep into the murky depths,
    flirting with his soul and kissed by
    his libido.
    A table set for two.
    Sweet intimacy and we dip into a Night mood.

    His gaze curls around me like
    thick tendrils of cigarette smoke.
    sultry incense for breathe,
    he winks and I’m free.
    "Sweetkoffee Soul...You make me groove.
    You bring me a lifetime, dipped in eternity...
    I need to have you...completely..."

    His cool, smooth and melodic voice rolls over me
    like ripples in a shallow pond.

    SweetDaddy Jazz
    I'm your woman!
    A jazzy riff on a Louisiana bayou front.
    Touch me once, at midnight and again in the
    morning.
    SweetDaddy Jazz,
    Oh lawd! A thrill in my thigh and like
    the caged bird, now free;
    I sing.
    I'm your woman...no your familiar, your intimate.
    Hmmmmm Hmmmmmm Hmmmmmph,
    SweetDaddy Jazz; man of appeal and class.
    My love, my man, and My stimulate;
    my completion and my jazz.

    ~*Copyright 2004
    "Suga Shack" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a smooth, sultry feel, this took me there, and back. Enjoyed the laid back style of this.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    str8 off the hook
    i enjoyed this
    likes ya sytle
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was off da chain tyte write on point !
    flow on
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always, I am completely blessed. Thank you all for nothing but love!
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet...you already know ~ you are...

    Amazing,

    Astonishing,

    Astounding,

    Awe-inspiring,

    Extraordinary,

    Fabulous,

    Far-out,

    Glorious,

    Prodigious



    Whew...now I need to go catch my breath... :spin:


    Praise for your Mind and Quill...if I've never been impressed before...I have been with this peace...Forgive me for the lack of composure...but your work on this was just that good... :toast:


    0000000000000000
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was classy sexy and of couse....sultry:)...I was impressed:)
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a nice jazzy descriptive flo...
    one love
    khasm