Black Poetry : Sweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 11, 2009.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You made love to me​

    Sweetly and completely,
    Methodically and intently.
    You made love to me
    not only physically but mentally, spiritually
    and emotionally.
    You caressed and explored every
    fiber of my being and awaked in me something so primal
    and raw.
    NO need for pretense or romantic overtures
    Just straight up and real.
    You made love to me and created in me a need for more
    and a never ending want that can only be filled by you.
    You made love to me and moved moutains and planets
    you made me feel alive even as I died in
    your lap. You made love to me and it was sooo
    sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    You made love to me
    it was like a summer night
    cascading on a cloud in flight
    you made love to me
    wit an essence of mental thoughts
    with touchies by spirits deeply raw
    you made me feel something
    yes never felt that only you can bring
    you made love to me completely
    for there was not a moment you
    didn't hit or made me feel
    when you made love to me in my
    peace be still dat's real love
    how you explored me awakening
    da avenues of affection
    where u comfort me in your love
    when you made love to me !
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm likin' i'm likin'

    feeling the love myself here

    poet

    peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just the way love should be made, how sweet it is. Great flows from you both, pen on fire I see.
     
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    sayy whaaaat sister?
    In his lap?
    Shooo i can dig it lol
    I loved this line
    even romanticsm fades but real love outlasts it all
    this was a succinct goodie
    props poetess :)
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da Street So'ja
    Thank you so much and Im glad you were feeling it.
    watzinaname
    Thank you so much Watz.
    triniti424
    Yeah I sorta stole that in his lap from something Shakespeare wrote.
    but thanks as always for the love
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    very sweet flow sis...

    perhaps willy lump lump shakespeare that is stole it from u.....

    he died in the lap

    ur flow lives on

    peace
     
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    thas was sweet...perfect title....

    one love
    khasm
     
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