Black Poetry : Sweet upset

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Sweet upset :heart:

    :spinstar: U & I :spinstar:
    Embrace…..
    For are bodies cling
    together as
    if they melted into one…… :love:

    whispers in da air
    as mystical powers move
    and send off a
    rapture of a
    sweet upset…
    a bliss of extreme
    passion release
    within the
    moment of
    :spinstar: U & I :spinstar:
    Taken it to the limit
    in our realm
    U pullin me closer
    Reachin into my soul
    Holdin my spirit as U
    Set my essence free
    take
    :spinstar: ………. Me
    :spinstar: …………. tonight :love:
    within a dream that only
    U can pose and make right
    Ur rose in full bloom
    my nectar spreads da air
    For a sweet upset
    my body yearns and
    mind lingers….come roam
    and
    Take
    :spinstar: ……… me
    :spinstar: …………….tonight
    inside your world
    For thy is my King
    An I Ur Queen
    tonight
    In this
    :spinstar: Sweet upset :spinstar:
    in a hush...
    I whisper.....
    ..............I
    ...........want
    ...........you :luvv:

    a blkangel thang..... ​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet upset of emotions
    flowing freely from da rush
    of lovin and divine bliss
    a sweet rapture captured
    in the essence of passion
    as it release to a sweet upset
    flow on dis was hot !!!
     
  3. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi mzblkangel

    :thanks: 4 posting this 4 us. i'm a succur 4 happy endings & it sounded like this 1 had an xquisite ending. u sound like a romantic, like me, xcept more talented! keep it up.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...indeed it can be a lovely thang...
    i am glad you liked coming
    from the man of love sribes himself
    thank you
    your words mean alot

    Alkebulan..awww...thank you my brother
    and your welcome as well

    Peace my brothers
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetly posed, keep up the flow.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read.................
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watch out there now!!! mzblkangel is on a mission...one of romance and bliss. keep 'em comin' my eyes are open

    blak
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb thanks for t support and love on dis....eyes open huh?????
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very HOT in here right now. That was nice.
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: OOOhhhhhh the sweet wispers of love...... ;)
     
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