Black Poetry : sweet surrender

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by misty, Jun 18, 2002.

  1. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when all guards fall
    i feel a yearning for you
    to hear your voice
    to know what youre thinkin
    to hear you breathe
    to lay wrapped up in you
    to know how you feel
    how your day is going
    your favorite color
    favorite dish, favorite pass time
    where you like to be touched
    i feel the need to know you better
    i'm wanting you needing you
    i feel like being lost in the essence of you

    :heart: :kiss: :angel1: :luv:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one simple word- beautifull.

    nfinite
    jh.
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow
     
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    Surrender to me....and I will make you a POX....a prisoner of Xtasy!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful piece and
    an enjoyable read.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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