Black Poetry : Sweet Surrender

[Desert Storm]

Shimmerin and shinin
I want to keep alive
What I feel inside

What I'm rythmin
Sugar Ray,
Daddy So So

In concentration
Pure infatuation
Congradulatin with persuasive
Stimulations

Creatin the distant participation
Of other strangers
QUIETLY SUFFERING
Honey, You got to talk to me

You say my voice be so sweet
The way your imagining things
Maybe you think
I'll elate sweet suga coco beans
In your mouth

Sweet and tender secrets
Juicy ideal but in reality
They just can not be

I'm every women
Or maybe I'm just being me

The way I make you feel...
Sweet surrender (you say to me)
And jealous hearts need just to turn away.

Desert Storm

 

[GQ]

Uh Huh DS...

Sweet indeed!!! Melt in ya mouth sweet!!!

Peace
GQ

 

[one_love]

Nice Rhyme!

I'm definately feeling this one!
One_Love

 

[Desert Storm]

Thanks one_love y'all always come thru right in the nick of time.
Desert STorm

 

[Desert Storm]

Thanks Cindy,I be peepin your poetry fa sho. Thanks for replying I'm glad you liked it. Yeah the call is universal sis. (((UNDERGROUND))).
Desert Storm