Black Poetry : Sweet Surrender

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shimmerin and shinin
    I want to keep alive
    What I feel inside

    What I'm rythmin
    Sugar Ray,
    Daddy So So

    In concentration
    Pure infatuation
    Congradulatin with persuasive
    Stimulations

    Creatin the distant participation
    Of other strangers
    QUIETLY SUFFERING
    Honey, You got to talk to me

    You say my voice be so sweet
    The way your imagining things
    Maybe you think
    I'll elate sweet suga coco beans
    In your mouth

    Sweet and tender secrets
    Juicy ideal but in reality
    They just can not be

    I'm every women
    Or maybe I'm just being me

    The way I make you feel...
    Sweet surrender (you say to me)
    And jealous hearts need just to turn away.

    Desert Storm
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh Huh DS...

    Sweet indeed!!! Melt in ya mouth sweet!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Nice Rhyme!

    I'm definately feeling this one!
    One_Love
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks one_love y'all always come thru right in the nick of time.
    Desert STorm
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Cindy,I be peepin your poetry fa sho. Thanks for replying I'm glad you liked it. Yeah the call is universal sis. (((UNDERGROUND))).
    Desert Storm
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And last but not least. GQ,thanks for yo reply. We need mo brothas like you. Thanks for the props. Loving your work indeed too.
    Desert Storm
     
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