Black Poetry : Sweet Release

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, May 2, 2005.

  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever just sat in front of your computer as
    the jazz filtrate your being with Louie asking you
    to "Come to duke's place"

    Listening to the hum of the modem as you tap
    tap on the keys
    not a sound is made or heard except the radio's
    soulful beat as you realize how grateful you are
    for life and Love for self and others

    Knowing everything has a time and place to be
    produced, published or written
    Isn't it great when you can feel the Sweet release
    of Just Being
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Sweet

    Good Nite!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the vibe of this, and the way you both seperated and united the music you were listening to, creating on the computer, and just, being. Very creative flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know this feeling as i've done it
    and release the flow ...yes indeed
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting..i likes i likes..nice read poetry mama!
     
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    Lurk, Rich and watzinaname, thank you for commenting on this piece. This is how I feel now days......Peaceful.
     
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    This is so much easier said than done......beautiful and inspirational pic you painted here.
     
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