Black Poetry : Sweet Luv

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wasnt so struck before that night,
    With love so sudden and so sweet.
    Your face bloomed like a flower,
    And stole my heart away completely,
    My face turned pale, a dark blue,
    My legs refused to walk away from you,
    And when you looked at me, i had no words to say,
    My life had seemed to push itself away,
    And then blood rushed to my face,
    Quickly i begin to regain strength,
    Telling you that i love you, and i'll always be there,
    Showing u how much i really care,
    U slowly take off my underwear,
    And we begin to share a moment of bliss,
    Kissing and touching,
    Caressing and hugging,
    Pulling and tugging,
    Making sweet love,
    Words from my eyes did start,
    They spoke as chords do from the string,
    And blood burnt round my heart,
    Roses are lover's first choice,
    As im calling your name,
    U heard my silent voice,
    Now our love appears to flow,
    I wasnt so struck before that night,
    With love so sudden and so sweet.
    Your face bloomed like a flower,
    And stole my heart away completely.


    Aaliyahmonet:):):):luvv:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyah:
    What a sweet write. Flo on poet

    Much luv to you
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Thanks 4 for the comment. I'll be back with another hot joint. Much love:)

    AM
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you did to that Man gyrl? but naw'll glad you broke through into the hive of honey lovin! Just make sure you don't get no cavities from all that sweet luvin cause the dentist is high to booty on fillings!
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When reading this the word struck came to my mind, because it was very striking. Wonderful piece.
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx:)

    Thank you all for the comments, as mentioned before i'll be back with a new joint:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh... this was nice and sweet... flow on sis!!!
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Sonnee

    Thanks Sonnee long time no see sis:) I've missed ya. Thanks for all the love ya'll, stay blessed:)


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just too beautiful made me feel it was me ....lol
     
  10. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Lol, i know right:) Its all good though, nice to see ya back we've missed ya Rich:)


    A<:kiss:
     
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