Black Poetry : Sweet Love

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet love took me
    And loved me
    Took me as he walks in the door
    Pulled my body close to his…
    Under the starz
    Bodies dripping
    Love pouring
    Giving me all I need and more
    Love no classification
    Within perfection
    Sweet love took me
    Burning fires passed the desire
    And passion was born….
    Me on top of him
    Him on top me
    Inside my love he play
    As my body sway
    We danced in the midnight moon
    Until the morning sun…..
    He didn’t let go….pacified in his love
    Surrendering in me
    Like an addiction to a drug
    I inhaled his love
    As he breathe my love
    It took over
    Sweet love as the chemistry connected us
    We went to a place we never been
    Sweet love took me
    Tears pouring love growing
    Pleasure hit the sky
    As sweet love took us
    Through the orbs
    Around the world
    As our bodies intertwined
    Sweet love feed the passion
    Thunder roar
    As our souls soar
    We released the rage
    Like wild fire
    The embrace
    The essence
    As we surrender to
    Sweet love
    Sweet love took us
    Took us
    As he walks in the door
    Pulled my body close to his…
    Feels so right don’t let go of me
    Sweet love…

    (C) 2004
    BlkAngel ​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one would want a love like that to release the hold on them. Gentle images penned here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that's a beautiful love sweetly done
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    peace
    angel
     
  5. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel-The seductive Heat of Love captured by your pen has singed me. Don't stop, Namyh
     
  6. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm,

    Whoa, you have a brotha wrapped up in your words. This was stimulating.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Harry Hyman..thanks


    Pharaoh Jaheel :blush:

    thank you my brothers 4 da love

    peace angek
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your undying faith in and vision of love is inspiring, sister. Much love :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed most welcome
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gempis...


    Rich... :love:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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