Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sweet Kisses Series 1

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stepping into the shower..
    my thoughts drift to sweet kisses..
    touching those places he had touch..
    rinsing those areas..still feeling his touch...
    water rushing...
    the warmth from the shower inducing
    pass desire. That only moments ago. is where he
    stroke me..
    survey me..
    explored
    all of me...
    oh..
    the pressure of the water massage my mental..
    with a smile ..
    a sense awakening. Feeling you once again..
    stepping in
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    taking time to
    express those tender moments....
    how sipping from the fountain of love
    is the fountain of life..
    to feel love once is indeed
    a life time of ever lasting memories...
    that grows in value with time
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    he invited me to come..
    to his palace
    the fortress of his heart..
    he wish to know of my
    hidden treasure
    those intimate places
    that fire the moan of the song..
    sung from my vault to his fortress
    feverish desire
    I came
    He conquer
    I surrender
    Again
    and again
    Yes again
     
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    Your attention to detail is wonderful, I felt as though I could imagine those feelings of passion remembered, and yet to come. Looking forward to reading more of this series for sure.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Did i do that to ya !!
    about last night ...well let me say this was tight
    and again and again my mind took u

    next pt.please i gotta know what we did ...smile
     
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    this poem was fluid.
    very smooth.
    thanks, bluewater.
    Desert Storm
     
  5. Bluewater

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    Hey Family
    Thank you all so much for the love on this dropol
    it's all about the love, and that's a wonderful thing:hearts4:

    yes Brother RICH you did that you did it all
    :hearts3: You are a sweet heart.

    Once again thank you all for the LOVE

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Wow that was a amazing and beautiful poem. It was sensual and passionate and I was drawn in living your words. Loved it.
     
  7. Bluewater

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    Hi Sis
    I'm sohappy you could feel the passion
    Thanks again sis for the love

    Peace~N~Love

     
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