Black Poetry : Sweet Kisses (1poets challenge)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, May 30, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thers one thing in this world
    That really rings my chimes
    Puts it on me heavy!
    Makes me want to kill Father Time

    Being caught up into a kiss
    To me thats real beauty
    Before I became "active"
    I looked forward to kisses-truly!

    I've been thru many loves
    But I can remember only one
    My new friend-ex lover
    Gave me the kiss that left me undone!

    That kiss curled my toes!
    It lifted up my heart
    Ooh, Im trying to keep this clean
    Because The details I didn't even start!






    :love: :love:
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    cum on hun...
    you gotta cum with
    more than that...
    get as close to the line without going over
    cause i know your style is more bolder

    remember that scribe you kicked on serenti collab piece?
    i know you got it in you gurl
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet drop da heat
    let us feel how u be unique
    scribe on !
     
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    thats right SwtT! tell em! There will not be no kissin and tellin here Today. Keepin them wondering! lol!
     
  5. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    "Well" I see ya don't kiss and tell huh??? this was nice Keep expressing yourself.....

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    uh huh. Som'n tells me you :kiss: like a champ!!!!
    nuff said.
    Peace to ya, poet!
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm-no no no , Im not telling this time..wait til later when I can make it rated R... :)
    $Rich-thanks for the compliments. Ill drop the heat ...One day :)

    Purple-Thank you , you understand!!!
    aqueen-thank you
    skybe7-hopefully all the recipents of my kisses think that same thing
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo, it's nothing like those kisses that take your breath away, make your legs weak, the heart flutter and make you stutter... for sho'... feeling the flow

    peace
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My imagination can take it from there
    Though I love the way your kisses dare
     
  10. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes the passion in a kiss can indeed can leave u speechless...my imagination is flowin...thank you very much:kiss: :kiss: :thanks:
     
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