Black Poetry : Sweet Dreams....

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enough is enough
    you purged yourself
    from myself and put
    your life on another shelf.
    Without a word
    you got the h*** out
    nothing left to save
    or shout about.
    So why then are you
    appearing in my dreams?
    Just the other night, been
    happening lately it seems
    deep in my psyche
    there you were
    you appeared
    don't get me wrong,
    I ain't scurred
    but that part of my life
    is over, not a friend
    not a lover, just, not....
    I can't pretend
    don't want you hurt
    don't want you dead
    just want you out
    of my @#*! head
    Give me a peaceful,
    soothing slumber,
    if you wanna talk
    you've got my number
    Just please,
    before I scream,
    get the @#*! out
    of my dream.
    Good night.....
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte...i like, i like,
    much love,
    -story
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my goodness dis was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    get out get out get out !!! of my dreamz
    love this
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was str8
     
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    :D I loved this!!!!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for letting me know you like this piece, the story.
    Rich and Sweet babyface, thanks for the love on this one.
    Thank you for the thumbs up mzblkangel.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow....feelin' this
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you sis

    I know the feeling...smh
    Hope a peaceful nights are in your future.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the props on this Foxi.
    Thank you Nita. Actually, I've been sleeping better already. Last night's dream was, well, nevermind....lol.
     
  10. angelicsage

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    Girl...

    ^5 times infinity itself...

    It's funny...how the thought of them
    just seems to "Creep" in...when you
    don't need it and
    your emotions can't afford it...

    I feel you on this...not only that
    but it was def' a "Tyte Write"
     
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