Black Poetry : Sweet Chocolate Kisses(my add to the chocolate theme)

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here is my contribution to the chocolate theme before the year ends.

    Rain on my your sweet chocolate kisses.
    You melt on my lips and I begin to taste you with my tongue
    MMM you taste so sweet as you swirl around in my mouth
    and smoothly slide down my throat
    Your sweet chocolate kisses I am so addicted to
    and you are just right for my sweet tooth

    Rain on me your sweet chocolate kisses
    Leaving a trail of chocolate goodness
    on my neck. Your warm sticky chocolaty
    aroma is so intoxicating to my senses
    it takes me a minute to realize that
    I am on a sugar high and
    I am your chocolate fiend
    Ready for my next fix

    Rain on my your sweet chocolate kisses
    You got me licking my fingers so I don't waste a drop
    Those sweet chocolate kisses have me in a trance
    They are more delicious with every flick and lick.
    I want you to pour it on me

    Rain on me your sweet chocolate kisses
    Covering me with your sweet chocolate kiss
    having me holler for more, more, more
    I am like a kid at a candy store

    Rain on my your sweet chocolate kisses
    as I close my eyes and feel you slide
    your chocolate rod inside and you begin again
    to kiss my chocolate stained lips and I savor all of your flavor

    Rain on my your sweet chocolate kisses
    as I feel you melt into me and fill me up
    with your your hot chocolate and mix with mine
    making a new chocolate flavor
    that can't be brought in the best of gourmet stores

    Rain on me your sweet chocolate kisses
    for I can't get enough
    You got me on a sugar high
    Addicted to your chocolate smile
    Craving for that sweet chocolate kiss that I always miss
    I need my next fix

    Rain on me, pour on me
    your sweet chocolate kisses
    For I am now your chocolate fiend
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Ms Beautiful...you sealed the deal on the Chocolate flow! I loved it!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This rained down like a chocolate bliss, sensually scribed poetess.
     
  4. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you HopelisRomantic and Watzinaname for your comments.
     
  5. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You chocolate fiend you ... satisfy that chocolate fix :) I love it. Keeping the chocolate theme alive ... nice. I'm with HopelistRomantic nad Watzinaname. GR8 write. :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeeee! this was da chocolate factory jem of beauty
    let it rain chocolate covered drops .....man o' man !!!!
     
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