Khasm13 : sweet chariot of fiyah...

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  1. Khasm13

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    i see you blazin a luminous trail across the sky
    you think that you are apollo's boy
    cause you are riding so high
    dropping ash and burnt air
    in my eye
    i see you
    and i see that no one can stop your music as you fly
    higher
    _____higher
    __________and higher still
    the intricate facets of your elaborately laced moving throne
    glimmered as
    da diamonds shone and dazzled while you displayed your will
    us mere mortals go from flesh to bone
    to dust...one lifetime is just the begining cusp
    of your existance....
    the tantalizing flames force me to watch
    shattering all of my resistance...
    your persistance at being in the center
    causes fear to enter
    my stomach
    as da chill shivers me like winter
    sweet chariot of fiyah
    you scorch the sky
    higher
    _____higher
    __________higher
    sonic booms scream louder then the town cryer
    i know you own the clouds
    but still i wonder how can the creation
    become more powerful then the creator's not so proud
    hands...you are more then one
    and more then one life you demand
    i wonder if us men really understand
    the repercussions
    of your destructive lattice structure band
    sweet chariot of fiyah...i see you soaring above
    and i know japan does....
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm

    you been droppin some serious vibes...
    keep um stackin like tarter upon beggers teeth
    Peace
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    LIKES THIS FLOW
    JUST KEEP ON DROPPIN
    I BE LOOKIN
    PEACE
    ANGEL
     
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    very deep strong scribe brutha this here is tyte
     
  5. Khasm13

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    and the next time it shall be fiyah....
    thanks fam for feeling this jones...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh it's always felt...and straight to the core of course. you're no doubt a strong scriber...and you push it to the max...and always gets deeper with time.You got it going on...
    much luv to ya...queentswana :)
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

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    this is different and i like like it alot...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You set a flaming image across the sky with that descriptive style, keep that flow going.
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks again fam...
    i know some of my poetry is abstract
    thanks for feeling it...
    btw...i'm talking about nuclear missles
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel I know what this is about but can't articulate it.. but I liked that charriot of fiyah.

    JAH Lives.
     
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