Black Poetry : SWEET BROWN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jun 20, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strawberry moon rising in June.
    Looking like a hunters moon.
    Not quite full.
    Beautiful brown all a glow.

    I commented I am trying to tell
    the world about the beauty of you.

    I want to take you in
    Don't let things and life change your hue.

    You are so bright so I stared a while.
    Taking in all you have to offer.

    Moon milk necter dripping from your glow.
    Shows me new things about you I did not know.

    Pink moon, snow moon, wolf moon do.
    The things I like to see in you.

    When I am feeling down.
    I speak your name.

    You thought I didn’t know
    I look at it thru the mirror

    Like a raven.
    Flying no one sees or know.
    I am talking to you sweet woman.

    I love how you flow. Much Love always.
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! I loved this Brother Hodee! Capturing the essence of how a man feels when he looks at and admires Pure Beauty...Black Beauty...How when we're feeling down all we have to do is utter that special name and our world is alright again!!!!!

    Thank you for this awesome write!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed like honey, just genuinely sweet Hodee. Great to read you again brother.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my brother you expressed me so well....lol
    i love the way you showered the truth of a feeling when it see outside the box
     
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