Black Poetry : Sweet and Sticky

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Jan 2, 2004.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sweet and so sticky
    cant wait to taste you
    been hungering for you
    desiring you
    thinking of you
    admiring you....

    So sweet and so sticky
    yet you hid from me
    couldn't find you anywhere
    now is that fair
    that you don't care,
    are you even aware?

    So sweet and so sticky
    I think I'll lick you first
    before I nibble
    before I bite
    is that alright?

    So sweet and so sticky
    I can't have you yet
    got to find my wallet
    glad you caught my eye
    finally ready to buy
    you off that shelf.

    So sweet and so sticky
    I grabbed your stick
    getting ready to lick
    I want to taste you so bad
    it's been so long since I've had
    a CARAMEL APPLE.
     
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    this was spicy...
    like the twist
     
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    It's ok...All candy is sweet...I enjoyed this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa sticky candy apple
    smooth scribe that's feverish
    let da bite be nibbles
    yummy for da tummy
     
  5. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta love them apples
    you know, the caramel kind
    I'd give you a sample
    but you see my mind
    is telling me not to share
    but you don't care
    do you?
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    CarrieMonet...

    Nice...nice...very nice. Nice twist too....

    You have a nice smooth flow in this piece.

    :thanks: for sharing with the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    this was really cute...
    love the metaphor...
    leaves a lot to the
    imagination...

    nice flow & rhythm...
     
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    lol this hd me smiling
     
  9. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It had me licking my lips..I want a caramel appel. :lips:

    Thanks for the kind comments!
     
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    hahahahaha....go'head Carrie. This was tooooo sweet
     
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