Black Poetry : SWEEPER

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Her love
    was
    a human
    sweeper
    she
    grasp
    as
    a keeper
    sweet
    deep
    and divine
    her
    smile was
    sunshine
    dancin
    in
    radiant
    gliss
    between
    erotic
    bliss
    she
    was a
    SWEEPER.. :smokin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A sweeper
    a keeper
    able to burrow deeper
    deeper than the earth's core
    when u think you've hit bottom
    there's alwayz...more

    This was a sweet drop
     
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    peace,

    ok, brother $$RICH$$ I'm feelin' da sweeping motion of da luv flow!!
     
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    I
    AM,
    A SWEEPER,
    a keeper of hearts,
    collecting hearts and souls,
    like the grim reaper,
    I am a sweeper,
    tearing your heart from your chest,
    so it may be joined by mine,
    your sould and mine..
    shall combine..
    i am a sweeeper..
    yea baby..
    thats what you call me,
    your sweeper,
    Your hearts only keeper.

    **great drop.. :kiss2: nice to see ive swept you off your feet.. L) :donttell:
    lol.. love peace.. n soul glo!
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And this was so very nice not a lot of words but who said you needed many words for your brilliance to be heard.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In da sweep of her love
    she carry my heart
    into a maze of tomorrow
    thankz watzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!

    thankz info-moetry
    indeed the motions is waving on a sweeping bliss
    she leave me in aweeeeee!!!

    poeticmanifesta.............
    ya motion sway deep
    sweepin me off my feet
    from the treat of sweet
    bliss & the hearts great
    tenderness well miss
    i wuv dis magical sweep
    Thankz sista for the flow.
    wow !

    Alicia.........thanks
    u know a few words can go deep
    and long expressing the love bliss
    and the sweepin motion to da heart
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dustpan of man... :smooch:
    She's a keeper!
     
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    you know word she sweep for keeps
    thankz 1poet
     
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    This is a very lovely write.
     
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    thank you poetrymama
     
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