Quiet Poetry Lounge : SUSPRISE!!!

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a susprise for you dear love
    try to guess within ten,

    You've had it since the day I met you
    and you can keep it till the very end.

    Treat it as you would you own,
    feed it and love it each day.

    Take it with you, wherever you go,
    since you...no others I've known.

    Have you guessed yet? I'll give you a clue,
    it get's as red, as the sky gets blue.

    It sits in the palm of your hands,
    and it belongs to no one but you.

    It's raining now, but it won't wash away,
    and even the snow can't hurt it.

    The sun and the moon just adds to its joy,
    to help me see clear, the following day.

    You give up?...Okay...

    Promise you'll leep it till death do us part?
    the susprise I have for you is my... :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful and warm i'm in tears
    he will love this and to know u have a woman heart
    is the greatest treasure of all he one luck man
    he gonna love this i know it........beautiful sistah just beautiful
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart is warm because you felt this poem and all my thanks go to you, you're a wonderful guy.
     
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    i wish u two happiness forever
     
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    this was wonderful
    the joy of love
    likes this one....
    you wear it well
    Angel
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, I love it :luvv:

    That's what its all about. Beautiful
     
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    I haven't seen a time when you didn't take the time to show and share your love. You are truely a wonderful person.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks a lot jazzy...I luv your work as well and you're good. again thanks for your support, it meant a lot.