Black Poetry : SURVIVING

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thru all the heartaches
    & break ups
    i moved on
    after all the deaths
    & sorrow
    i made it thru
    thru all of the rough times of life
    which left me asking questions
    i've answered
    after all the anger
    & disappointment
    i kept my head high
    thru all the cold nights
    & small dinners
    i never went to sleep hungry
    after all the friends
    & family that gave up on me
    i kept living
    thru all of the times
    i almost didn't make it
    -------------I SURVIVED... :shades:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow we use this fourm to add voice spoken word
    if u like i can move this to one of our poetry forums so
    all can feel da vibes .....
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel free to do so..........thank you for the info. and reply.
     
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    this most def awesome flowing too lovin it
    thanks
     
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    this is a wonderful flow
    yes you are indeed suviving
    yes survive
    young poet...flow on
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Such a positive flow of survival, great one to wake up to!
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Bluewater and wazinaname, i appreciate the reply, but most of all i appreciate you, taking the time out to read it.....................thanx again. :D
     
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    lilcherry,

    the poet says, "all is well that ends well"
    bad memories are memories and lessons for wise folks that go on.....

    continue to write it
    one way poets fight it

    Peace and Blessings...
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rasheed.............................i'll keep fighting with my words, cuz my fists ain't strong enough to win the battle...........
     
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    Only the strong survive... :wink:
    and you made it happen...and I bow :bowdown: to you for your strenght and intelligence. Very nice piece...don't drop the pen :fairy:
     
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