Black Poetry : Surrounded By Hoodrats

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  1. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    Aint in tha clan but I stay in tha hood
    Surrounded by hoodrats and guttasnipes
    Shorties wit NO dreams or plans for tha future
    Girl soo dirty a douche couldn't soothe her
    Knawing on mens wallets looking fo cheese
    Walking down tha block all i see is hoes and hoodrats
    Shortage of real women........ I never understood that
    I thought mommas taught they daughters how to be ladies
    Not to have babies out of wedlock..... cook clean and fry hamhocks
    ****........
    Where is our generation going?
    Down the sewer grates...... hoodrats and guttasnipes is all I see
    Young girls lost in the jungle of life
    Claiming to be material of a wife.........wifey......... these shorties are unlikely to get a good man
    Cause they don't respect him
    Its hard to tune em out cause they walk around wit they as$es out
    True...... I've starred but never thought to pursue
    Weave tracks stuck in wit that hoodrat glue
    Where have all the good girls gone?
    Cause all I see is hoodrats and guttasnipes
    I feel like taking a Midnight Train to Georgia like Gladys Knight
    Get me a southern girl wit that southern love
    Fix me a plate of greens and I'll gladly make her body sing cause real love is all I'm after
    ****......... where the real women at?
    Why must I be in a city packed wit hoes n hoodrats?
    Like roaches they scatter to the man wit the thug persona when they see the light of they fake jewels
    Is that all it takes to attract a woman?
    What happened to your "make up"... u know.... DNA?
    I guess its all about being paid......... but I'm rich in love
    Ready to give that to a good woman
    MAN I'm looking for a good woman

    Wuts upstairs is revelent......... I need a woman with intelligence


    anothaLEVEL
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this but know not every woman in the hood is a hoodrat.
     
  3. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    yes...... I kno


    Sometimes u gotta call a spade a spade tho.



    much luv
     
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    i feel u bruh...
    all u gotta do is look a lil deeper...
    and u will find that keeper...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cause all I see is hoodrats and guttasnipes
    I feel like taking a Midnight Train to Georgia like Gladys Knight

    lol i loved that part. I like your style (writing style- that might have came out weird) well anywayz- I liekd it. It was funny, and true. SO real. I feel the same way. When I was little i always assumed the lil gurls would change...not be so effed up i nthe head...the nthey evolved to hoodrats (guttasnipes) BUT there are queens amonst the scallywags, pidgeons, bussdowns, and boppers. Many queens actually, but im not gonna discuss the content anymore, I will say I loved how you presented the peice and how you wrote it in such a ocnversational and matter of fact way. Nice
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is the real story of america
    we are in crisis
    but nobody seems to talk about it
    there's no quality of life
    life expands 60 or so years
    these people now think in the now
    boy are they in for a big surprise

    great story
    you luck in your search around all the poison

    DSS
     
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