Black Poetry : Surrender

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GwenDee, Mar 6, 2001.

  1. GwenDee

    GwenDee Member MEMBER

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    Pools of steamed desire - dancing serpentine spines.
    Remember laughing-crushed flowers by the nightstand.
    Dance, twirl, clap and hope. Surrender to the moment
    and and embrace life.
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    pools of steamed desire

    luv'n it GwenDee!

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :)

    Destee
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GwenDear

    You have such a gift! Your vignettes are so powerful, so rich with visuals I can FEEL...'serpentine spines', dancing. Indeed. YOU are the sensual one, beleedat!

    Thank you for coming...stay a while.

    A
     
  4. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crushed flowers

    on the nightstand...AND ALL THAT WENT ON BEFORE, DURING AND AFTER!

    Scribe, Ms. GwenDee!


    CELA
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome!

    BE
     
  6. belahni

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    ooooh sis!

    oohsisoohsisoohsis!!!!!

    :)

    B
     
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    GwenDee

    I didn't know how weak I was until you captured me with four lines

    But I really don't mind being held hostage to the form and sensual rhythm of your scribe

    *kidnapped*

    a blackbelle edition
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Embrace life I will.....
    Welcome Dee :wave:
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done, and exquisitely executed!

    Beautiful scribe! Keep it coming!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    short

    sweet
    and beautiful..........
     
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