Black Haiku : surprise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Oct 10, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    running this morning
    suddenly my own shadow
    appeared before me

    the sun had come and
    put me on stage in its light
    I glowed, so happy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    jogging alone too
    da sun rays is beautiful
    da shadow moving

    glowing beside u
    running in motion happy
    a morning feelin
     
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    Feeling the surprise
    I smile at the sun rising
    Inhale exhale breath

    The morning enjoy
    Bless to have another day
    feeling so refresh

    The birds are singing
    The children eating breakfast
    Smiling feeling Bless
     
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    i like this still tryin ta get the hang of this.. :angel1:
     
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    sun right above thee
    vertical line from head to light
    thy shadow lay down
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    low in the sky now
    that winter sun, my shadow
    is tall as a tree
     
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    the sun lovingly
    touching your face, content a
    new day you embrace

    new day, new energy
    the world seems so bright, time to
    shine your own lil' light.




    BTW gempis
    You didn't have to apologise for the 'bro' thing (wink wink), cause you didn't do anything wrong.
    But I just thought 'let me set that straight'. Meanwhile I thought it was very amusing and I could understand...it's the name. I still think it's funny hahaha.

    I got nothin but luv for ya also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    moham
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, thanks sweetie. and thanks for haikuin wit me!
     
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    the beauty of light
    is within the rays of ya
    tender heart that runs
     
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    :rolling: I like this..... Gempis





    Love liberty
     
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