Black Poetry : Surely

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by smoothsoul, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. smoothsoul

    smoothsoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely my type, you got plans for the night?
    I like your attitude, & the mood,
    Not to mention the conversations goin right.
    & If you ain't got nothin to do we could get up tonight.
    Perhaps downtown we can meet,
    You stay off Main Street?
    We could catch a movie or a bite to eat.
    Then we can roll through my spot -
    I got a plot, on a way we can make things hot.
    We could start off by gettin a candle lit,
    Then just chill for a bit,
    Relax, talk, and sit,
    We don't have to move too quick.
    Then we could flow with the vibe,
    As I show you my mind,
    Takin things one step at a time.
    Tonight I wanna love you down, but not in a traditional way -
    Sexin you with my mind and every word I say
    Conversatin in a new way;
    Transcendin to higher heights, like floatin in space,
    Takin our minds to a new time and place,
    Stimulatin you from outside your personal space.
    Undressin you with my eyes, as I brace your mind,
    Takin my time,
    To excite every mental g-spot I find.
    Cuz tonight I'mma please you like no guy has before,
    You got pleasure spots I intend to explore,
    And I'll get mine as soon as I give you yours.
    Invigoratin, stimulatin, as we're conversatin.
    Mental satisfaction is what I'm aimin,
    Fulfill your desires with mentality not tact,
    Creatin a connection between us with our eye contact.
    You got me turned on with your voice, the way you speak,
    Verbal intercourse has got me weak.
    Arroused by the way we go head-to-head,
    The words we've said,
    Tonight I'mma please you outside of the bed.
    We ain't gotta take off clothes to get in the zone,
    We can verbally, intellectually, mentally bone,
    Givin eargasms, on a level that's mentally sexual.
    Tonguin you down with my intellectual.
    I wanna take you places I know you've never been,
    And when it's over, we don't need downtime, we can do it again.
    Enticin you with my thoughts, a conscious ecstacy,
    Interchangin words while interlacin fantasies.
    Experiencin pleasure surpassed by none,
    & We don't gotta stop till we both get done,
    Tonight I got plans to stroke you with my mental,
    We can wait another night to get physical,
    Tonight I'mma love you down in a manner that Dead Prez put best,
    Cuz tonight it's time, boo, for a lil mind sex.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ya droppin da mind sex up in here
    tyte poetic display inside da mental go head rock one's world ...
     
  3. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the rhyming. Excellent!
     
  4. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm "surely" diggin' u on this.
    Nice drop.
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How romantic:blush: Sounds like a night you'd never forget. Mental sedation ranks over physical anyday:spinstar:

    :flirt:

    :picture:
     
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