Black Poetry : Supreme Being

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 22, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Celebrate the heart's
    Ragtime religion
    Calculate,
    God's swan song
    Long division

    The good word's out
    Poor passed the test
    Newborn free willies
    Do the rest

    Got my confession
    But I'm redeemed
    Supreme,
    Being me

    Trashed the place
    To save your face
    Conniving...

    Egotistical small fry
    Surviving,
    Delusion

    Keep loving them
    With kindness
    Back of the bus
    Beings blessed

    Let them conspire
    Cause I'm redeemed
    Supreme,
    Being me ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :read:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem
    i really dig the message

    keep the flow goin
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome message here bruh ya pen always leave a mark
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the vibe....
    loving ya pen
    just keep on keeping!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice message in this flow poet
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some think they should be blessed by passing out scraps of food when they're forever dining on four courses. Tight drop, very sly style.
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this was nice but let me drop some knowledge

    Cats appear wise with clear eyes but fear the skies of knowledge
    Rather thunder wackiness and blunder tactless too much garbage
    Need to educate the beast and bring to a state of peace, college
    Could be a beginning
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Supreme, being me!

    Nothin' but LOVE, thanks ya'll
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always keeping it conscious...
    as only a poet sought...can

    love this flow...long division
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice .. as I sit on the back of the bus...
    reading you...learning and feeling as I ride
    supremely...being...
    nice....very nice poem
     
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