Black Poetry : Superfragilistic love (to love you)

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love you
    is to exchange your form
    for the metaphysical
    and allow you to infiltrate my eternal membrane
    and proliferate all that is you in here
    to embezzle thousands of stolen looks
    and millions of hooded glances
    and surmount them into the masterpiece
    that comes second to only you
    to love you
    is to rock in heavenly momentum
    and indulge in superfragilistic moments
    of pure bliss
    of unwavering compilations of electrodes illuminating my existence
    that leaves me staggering blindly
    into another limbo
    of love…
    to love you
    is to live in a pre-ordained world
    dedicated to LOVE
    created for LOVE
    with you in mind.
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    too many hooded glances
    can be a rancid
    reminder
    of uninspired fire
    burning
    but this flame engulfs
    my yearning
    early in the morning
    each time i look at thee
    cause your heat spins me like
    a frisbee...

    nice wordplay on this piece....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da flow of this it makes a big statement
     
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