Khasm13 : supa hoes vol 2 --- da dirt do'n dog of desire

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  1. Khasm13

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    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    lubricated inserts
    hide the internal jerk


    this cat named amad
    claim to fame was his
    loot and his 11 inches hard
    quick to put a dinner for 2
    on his credit card
    and sing acapella love songs
    like a bard
    there was no shard
    of truth in his game
    quick to give a dame
    da boot after he tap'd them
    on numerous occasions women
    slap'd him
    see'n the truth after mack'n
    while other women
    where rack'n their brains
    try'n to explain
    what went wrong
    another sad love song
    caused by the charm'n brother
    with da supa dong
    when he would cum
    he would beat his chest like king kong
    he dated the same women
    not for long
    hits from da bong
    had amad think'n that he was invincible
    with a witty mental
    and a touch that was so gentle
    even the women that knew his stelo
    attempts to resist his charms were feeble
    he made this one woman go under the needle
    to get bigga breast
    cause he made her feel like she was less
    his mind games left the oppisite sex in a mess
    which leads me to today
    when he failed his hiv test
    sullen and depressed
    he took a half an ounce to da chest
    thoughts of suicide
    like david koresh
    why did he think he was untouchable
    like elliot ness
    walk'n back to his loft
    he saw a pretty woman
    in a tantalizing dress
    he thought to himself
    i'll mack her down
    then drown
    my sorrows till tomorrow
    she had the look that he liked
    she was just his type
    bang'n t&a
    and a grill piece that was tight
    he step'd to her and asked her
    whas up with drinks for tonite?
    she smiled with lucious lips
    and put her hands on her hips
    and said yes, let me write my number
    she reached into her purse
    pulled out a gat and twisted his stack back
    and amad forever slumbered
    then she said
    thas for fu<k'n me and my moms
    in da same week
    i hope you burn in hell
    you fu<k'n freak......


    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    dogz gotta flirt
    so fragile hearts be on alert

    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt
    so what if feel'n get hurt
    lubricated inserts
    hide the internal jerk.....
     
  2. angelicsage

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    Strong Medicine...

    The message in this piece is a two way street for men and women...
    The consequences of promiscuity can put you in your grave...
    whether it be revenge, crime of passion or the ultimate incurable diseases...
    It's sad...this was real for me...because I've seen this, know a few people
    just like this...men and women...Even seen some people die for it...
    they just couldn't see that their lifestyle....wasn't worth it, until it was too late.

    This was an awakening piece...Great writing as always!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    this was deep my brother...
    dirty dog always get his treat...
    but in da end he got the just desert...
    tryin to
    quench'n a lustful thirst
    da dog rises from da dirt
    daddy long stroke supa poke
    is no joke when put'n in work
    always chase'n da next skirt...
    onetime to many..and the skirt
    is what pulled him down....

    just an Angel's view..
    i like this read...
    ya did it again...laid a bomb
    work dat pen.... :smokin:
    and ya know i been waitin for this piece..lol :angel1:
     
  4. triniti424

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    "so what if feel'n get hurt
    lubricated inserts
    hide the internal jerk....."

    and this...is why you... cant tell me...that you are anything less than extraordinary cause the twist in the tale told the truth that terrifies mothers and kills our brothers...at the end of a khasm piece/peace...you can do nothing but sit back exhale and ride yo poetic high to clearer skies...

    yup luv it :)
     
  5. $$RICH$$

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    another masterpiece u scribe
    tyte drop bruh
     
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    you are just amazing, Khasm. this is an incredible piece of work. big ups
     
  7. krazelyricks

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    Dang......that was fly.......I like how you put it in two perspectives like that....that was tyte........I love it.......it was awesome Khasm.....absolutely awesome...
     
  8. Ayaatee

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    Amazingly tyte flow!! You did ya thang!
     
  9. caramelpython

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    your flow is sick!!! this peice is like whoa..... get ys flow on!
     
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    another piece from a great poet:) Khas, you always do ya thing, and you do it so well:)
     
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