Black Poetry : SunShowers (for SGP)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, May 5, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am instantly set adrift…
    …euphorically LiFteD to
    majestic new heights &
    all of my senses are open
    W I D E… from the moment
    your eyes meet mine & my
    mental begins to unwind
    then entwine with that
    phenomenon affectionately called… You

    it’s like that tyme— when it
    rained while the sun still shyned

    it’s unexplainable…
    incomprehensible…
    …the way you make me feel
    inside is beyond belief & it
    leaves me immediately floating
    on the concise but cliché … cloud 9
    whenever you take the tyme
    to bless my space with the
    amazing thing lovingly called… You

    it’s like that tyme when it
    rained— while the sun still shyned

    your beauty—
    is heartbreaking.
    your essence—
    is breathtaking.
    experiencing You—
    is soul-shaking.
    & I am anticipating the next encounter…
    (witheverypoeticbreathipossess)

    just like that tyme—
    when it~~~r
    ~~~~~~~~~a
    ~~~~~~~~~~i
    ~~~~~~~~~~~n
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~ed... while the sun still shyned.


    (can you dig it?)


    sunshyne.

    ©SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. balisina

    balisina Member MEMBER

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    a question

    Don't get offended. I write a litle poetry and I hope to find the time to write more. I do not have any friedns who do poetry, and I don't have many chances to get out and be around them, so I will ask this here---

    why when some people write their poems, do they use all those designs with the words and letters--- the step-ladder letters, the capital letters, etc. like in this poem Sun Shower. DO you think the reader will miss something if they only have your words to go by? I'm just asking.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista GA

    When she shyne's ~ the whole world smiles!
    This is a BEAUTY girl, I'm sure SGP will love
    dis one hea ~ it's terrific!

    Just maaa-velous :wink:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BALISINA....

    1st. thank you for the read.

    2nd. i am not one who is easily offended. after all
    i don't think you would have asked the question if
    you didn't really want to know the answer... correct?

    3rd. since you don't write... i don't know if you
    know or not (no offense), but poetry is an art. a form
    of self expression & it is, & can be interpreted
    differently by different people. i don't know why your
    poet friends or the other poets on the page use the
    lines & spaces & capital ltrs... & since you asked Me
    & not Them... i can only speak for myself when i say
    i use them so that when someone is reading the piece
    they can get a feel for my flow (or the way i was flowing
    when i wrote the poem)& they can better understand
    how i would interpret the piece if i were reading it
    to them. understand? for example the word "wide" in the
    poem... i could have just typed wide but W I D E would
    give my fellow poet a better understanding of how open i
    am feeling. hope i answered your question satisfactorily.

    if not send me an email... kay? thanks again for the read!

    OneLuv~
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2. thank you my dear!... for the read & the comp!
    you know it means a lot coming from you... since you do
    get down fa yours poetess!! :) AlwaysPeace~
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysLove...

    hopefully--

    glad you anitcipate me--
    i anticipate you--
    wholeheartedly--
    thank you--
    for your artistry
    I'm open W I D E
    lovin the feeling--
    *like that time it rained--
    and the sun still shined...

    Sean
     
  7. balisina

    balisina Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the answer. I said I do NOT have any friends who do poetry, and that I DO write a little. Poets write for other poets? Thanks for the information. I'm learning, but I have not had a chance to study this in any class. Yours was the first poem I got to on this board, and the word art you used just brought to mind the question about that I had had before.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL NOW SUPER NICE AND SWEET
    LOVIN IT!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhmmm, well said...on the response. i totally agree. now, you know, sweet sunshyne, that this heyah is simply beautiful, dear friend.

    ~~mindwavesoflovepoetry~~
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$.Lister. well now! thank you for showin'
    me love on this one... AS USUAL!! ... You Two are foreva
    Priceless in SunShyne's book!! Thanks again. AlwaysLove~
     
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