Black Poetry : sunshine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jan 17, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sunshine is a beautiful thing...
    that brightens in so many ways....

    as i wake up each mornin
    i turn and look at my ways
    how i get up and open the shades
    all cuz i like to soak in natues light
    da suns beautriful rays
    how the first thing i think of is
    not what i did last night
    tryin to remember yesterdays thots
    but of what ima write
    that will inspisre tomro's people
    or what ima write that shows my appreciation
    or dedication
    to the arts
    the struggle
    the survivers who faught
    i wake up looking at my ways
    examinin my days
    counting my time left here on earth
    not by
    i love you's
    or good byes
    not by seconds, minutes
    or any measurements of time
    but rather by
    my ability to write
    and spread
    my wisdom
    to my fellow kindom
    in hopes of them continuing
    to do the same
    provoking world change
    to hopefully a start of a brighter day
    not only from the suns rays
    but for earths people.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like sunshine to start a day
    in a positive way , love the flow
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful way to awaken...
    to both "sun and life"
    count me in ...on the sun, ...thanks for the spray of sunshine.
     
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    Such a positive vibe, seems you let the sun inspire you to write an uplifting scribe. Made me smile. Flow on.
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall
     
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    Everybody loves the sunshine... well done!
     
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    Good morning...

    Nice.
     
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    daroc......






    i love the sun...
    i love this poem

    i love this scribe....
    just tight


    Libertylady:heart:
     
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