Black Poetry : Sunshine

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    When Sunshine walks by I can see
    the wind tickling her polished toes
    just to rub against her thighs
    and men get caught
    as if they bought
    a piece of her time
    like money falling from the sky
    she smiles and I imagine
    some cool word to say
    but I dare believe I have the heart to
    watch the rivers of her lips part
    I’d rather observe and know
    a masterpiece
    a work of art had moved pass
    not fast....but slow
    cause when sunshine walks by
    I can not equate the hand of
    God that made
    her copper skin
    her star lit eyes
    her breast like big tear drops
    and milky thighs
    Like rain I thirst
    to touch her grounds
    and be found in the treasures
    of her secret place
    Dancing like the wind in the leaves
    I want to climb her trees of intimacy
    Sunshine umm.. Sunshine
    owns everything in these urban street
    and I’m seeing her being all
    and all of her being
    As I watch her move and listen
    the only thing she’s missing is a crown
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    hey THA HOOKUPMAN this was awesome flowing here
    but in this forum we mainly load wave files for others
    to hear surely this should be in the POETRY FORUM ABOVE
    i will move it for you so all can read and feel the tyte scribing
    of ya pen very nicely done happy u join us welcome to
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    Sounds like someone got your attention, I like the way this was posed. Welcome to Destee, keep the flow going.
     
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    :wave: welcome to destee
    likes this scribe indeed
    nice meeting you in chat happy
    you found ya way to the fourm
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Welcome 2 the family Brother. I'm feeling your flow indeed...Now do the dang thing and stay 4 awhile with us.
    Scribe on poet. :deal:
     
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    AWWWW!!

    I wish I was Sunshine the way u're talking about her.
    Very nice piece.
    This is so beautiful.
     
  7. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    u

    you could be her holla at me sista
     
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    I wanted 2 bring this back to the top.
     
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    this was a type piece of sunshine...sho nuff

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Hi Hookup
    Your flow is filled with sunshine
    with a delicate weave intimacy
    Very refreshing :)

    Peace
     
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