Black Poetry : Sunset

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I watch you, until you disappear,
    a dance of vanished stepping-
    down inside an empty box
    where darkness and void
    (your backdrops)
    lock their hands around your head,
    but they are gentle
    easing out your streaks,
    the orange and red
    in your dilemma eyes,
    to rest….
    to rise again….
    yet now, the souls from all around
    silently call out your name,
    to answer them all, you ignore your weariness
    and no one knows your pain
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i never thought of it like that...
    this portrait is full of beauty...
    thank you for this.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea yea--nicely said.....
     
  4. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read, and the love....it's greatly appreciated

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    sunrise

    only to my surprise
    after the wearyness of eyes
    sensual we'd fade into the demise
    broadly all her glory to creation applies

    sunrise

    glazing before our eyes
    blinded in depths of your ties
    to He who created
    i seek to see a place
    in which i see this glorious face
    which comforted in the brisk of the cold
    and came forth strong and bold
    and knew times of old
    kept secrets of .....wonders you behold
    sunrise how might i come to be embeded within your fold
    rise above the inconsistency i'm told

    sunrise ..... i walk into the glow of ..... into your beauty birdS fly ... and i wonder were would u go to see your, bye and bye .... and seeing you gives me answer to my why's ..... and i love seeing you in my blue skies .... sunrise
    sun rise
    sun rise
    " SON RISE "
     
  6. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    herlove---

    truly breathtaking....thank you for the response....and for taking my picture and Picasso-ing it up :D......much love

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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