Black Poetry : ~*SuNnY nIGhTs*~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Dec 14, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you
    me
    this park,these trees
    the wind
    the breeze
    the desire
    to feel the fire
    the power
    the sensation
    only non verbal communication
    the world is exempt
    and
    we are left tempted
    the skies
    no thought of goodbyes
    just gazing into each other's eyes
    no lies
    or
    falsehoods
    just you and me- us
    for good
    the light
    of the night
    the reassurance that everything will be alright
    then
    the smile
    the gentle kiss that lasted awhile
    the intensity of lip locking
    no one there cockblocking
    no one around to interupt or interfere
    no one but you and me here
    most would say we are in love
    but its lust
    lust and awhole lot of trust
    we make it possible for the sun to shine bright
    for the sun to shine bright in the night
    the breeze
    the trees
    you
    me.... :tweety: :hearts1: :ilu:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    You
    me
    the summer breeze
    under the shade
    caressin
    bathing in warmth
    you
    me
    hand n' hand
    touching
    laughing
    sharing
    da moment
    in the park
    after dark
    under da
    cherrymoon
    you & me

    This was very sweet love the flow
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sun shining in the night...creative concept bringing forth a lovely flow.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you laid this very tight write...enjoyed this one....Angel