Black Short Stories : Sunny in the rosegarden (part3)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    billy goes home and brings back the flower and shows it to Sunny....
    Sunny shakes his head ....
    Than the Gardkeeper sais ""BRING HER TO ME SHOW HER TO ME"""

    ashamed billy walks to the gardkeeper and holds his head down....
    cause he finaly looked at the flower again and sees that she is bowed...

    [GK] ""I GOT SOME WORK FOR YOU BILLY ......YOU OBVIUS FORGOT THE GOLDEN RULLS!""

    ""BUt FIRST YOU ARE GOING TO PUT HER BACK IN THE GROUND.....

    OVER THERE.......""

    While billy is putting her back into the ground two man are passing by and than stand still nex to him and look how he is putting back into the ground....

    The man are looking at the flower and than one of them suddenly sais..

    ""mmm Thats a nice flower"" ........""can i try and toutch her ""

    Billy repsonds angry and says ""NO She Is Mine! ""

    [GK] ""IS SHE BILLY ????? IS SHE ???""'

    [GK] "'THAN WHY IS SHE HERE NOW ....HUH????''''




    ................


    it was silent in the gardan.....

    other visitors were turning around .....when the gardkeeper spoke...


    [GK] ""SHE STAYS HERE ......NOW.....AND I DECIDE WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO HER ....
    ""I WILL SEE IF I,M GOING TO GIVE HER BACK TO YOU......AND
    WE WILL SEE IF SHE IS GOING TO OPEN UP TO YOU AGAIN!!!!

    ""MAYBE SHE WILL OPEN UP TO ANOTHER....?.....

    ""BESIDES I HAVE TO HEAL HER NOW.....

    Than bill said ""i will be good to her now....i learned my lesson!!!"'

    [GK] ""WE WILL SEE""

    [GK] ""FIRST YOU ARE GOING TO SEE SOME LONELY DAYS AND HARD WORK IN MY GARDEN ...SPITTING GROUND.....
    ""AND DONT EVEN THINK THAT ONE OF THESE OTHER FLOWERS IS
    GOING TO OPEN UP FOR YOU CAUSE THEY HAVE SEEN WHAT YOU
    HAVE DONE TO YOURE FLOWER......

    Weeks go by and after hard work billy is allowed to be in the garden again
    were he Putted her back in to the ground....
    He imediadly runs to the spot were he put her back and sees that she is gone....
    He starts crying and says ..""were is she....? How could you do this to me...?
    than [GK] says on a soft tone ""you did this to yourself my son""

    [GK] "'but she isnt pluked by another man .....if that is what you think....""

    Billy stops crying ... ""she isnt????"" ...

    Than He starts Crying Out Loud ..and says ""ShE DIED!!!""

    Than [GK] says ""unfortunalty sumthimes that happens yes........""

    Billy Cries out More and more '....


    [GK] ""But not to her"".....

    "" what ?"' say,s billy and stops crying...

    [GK] "' that didnt happent to her""

    and GK takes bill by the shoulder and brings him to her......and billy kneels down and says "" i,m sorry i,m sorry.....he cries i,m so sorry"'' and starts toutching and kising her.......

    but still she doesnt open up...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release Rose & the garden
    beautiful story sistah keep'em coming
     
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    Thanks sweet :kiss: rich sinds youre the only one who readed Part 3 lol..... :rolleyes:


    i see i dont keep up with the :grouphug: others
    that ok ....
    i just put it down for ya enyway even if i have one reader at least ...
    i satisvied one....(that is always my motto)
    and even if no one wont respond i have always much joy reading it for myself and Lord.....Lol


    but wait untill i,m gonna drop "'like in the movies "' :cool:

    no lol with gods will i hope you will like that story...

    i think its beautifull...
     
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