Black Short Stories : Sunny in the rose garden.... (part 1)

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LibertyLady

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Sunny in the rose garden (part 1and Part two under the reply,s)

Ones the was a beautifull rosegarden....
And one day sunny went to this rose garden to look....
cause it was verry well known by man..... they all came in there to pluck a flower...
He entered the garden....and it was a magical place...
he looked around en was blinded by the beautifull roses..
Than a voice spoke and said ...."' hi my son"'
it was the voice of the Gard keeper....speaking to him....
"'what brings you here"'...
as sunny answered "'i was just looking""...
""aha ""........."' just looking.....? "' lord said..
"'or do you want some roses ?"' ......
sunny answered .."' well it would not be bad"'.... ""well ... Yeah "' he said..

""Well You can have ONE .."" the lord respond.....

..."'one ?'''...................................................
but there are so manny and they are all so beautifull......!

[GK] "'yeah thank you ....i know .....
nothing that comes from my hand is not perfect !!!! (remember that sisters and brothers )

[GK] ""but my son you can only pick one ............
take youre time .....
walk trough the garden ....watch ,look,..you can even sleep over here..
spend some time with one rose.......
before you pick one......

cause these are not 'just ' roses.......
they are special ones.....

Once you have choose one......
you may toutch her.....
and when she opens up ........

it means that she likes you.....
once you have toutched her ....
there will be an energie unleased...
that is called love.......
and this love...
will stay unless you keep the Golden rulles...
and the most inportent one of those rulles ...

"IS THAT YOU HAVE TO HONOUR ME ABOVE ANYTHING""...

you will remind and give me honour and praise..that it was i ..
who gave you the rose and that i brought you to her...


""i can do that .......uhhhh .....mmm i mean i think so yeah!!"'

[S ]"' butta what are the other rulls ?"' (as he scratces his head ..and one eye squeezed)

[GK]2 -"'after you have plucked her you can take her home...
but you have to feed the rose...
love it...
nurture it like youre own....
cause you would ""NEVER'' hate youre own flesh...

than she will grow...she will be in bloom..
and you will to...
and you will be as one....

3- When you will mistread the rose....
and the flower doesnt bloom..
and it looks like she is going to hit the ground....

you will have to bring her back to me......
i will call you wherever you are....
and you will have to come back to the garden..
spend time with me and work..


[GK] "'Now sunny .........

do you still want a rose ? ""








To be continued....
 

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Sunny in the rose garden

I've been slugging it out in religion and philosophy mostly. My first love is writing, albeit my focus has been on songs and movie scripting. Nevertheless, the short story has always been a favorite for me. Sunny in the rose garden is a quaint metaphor for me as a man to be mindful of. I know there's more to the story, but having lived a little it comes cler where this story can find its end. If Sunny is typical he's going to have to wind up back in the garden for having failed to do as he was told. We fellas sometimes don't trim and provide what you ladies are most needful for, I'll admit that much. So, while his desires are for roses he is being tasked to choose and care for one. I'm looking forward to seeing how Sunny winds up back in the garden. It just seems it has to be that way, him having to go back. Us fellas are hopeless I suppose.

Astro...... :weird:
 

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