Black Short Stories : Sunny in the rose garden.... (part 1)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny in the rose garden (part 1and Part two under the reply,s)

    Ones the was a beautifull rosegarden....
    And one day sunny went to this rose garden to look....
    cause it was verry well known by man..... they all came in there to pluck a flower...
    He entered the garden....and it was a magical place...
    he looked around en was blinded by the beautifull roses..
    Than a voice spoke and said ...."' hi my son"'
    it was the voice of the Gard keeper....speaking to him....
    "'what brings you here"'...
    as sunny answered "'i was just looking""...
    ""aha ""........."' just looking.....? "' lord said..
    "'or do you want some roses ?"' ......
    sunny answered .."' well it would not be bad"'.... ""well ... Yeah "' he said..

    ""Well You can have ONE .."" the lord respond.....

    ..."'one ?'''...................................................
    but there are so manny and they are all so beautifull......!

    [GK] "'yeah thank you ....i know .....
    nothing that comes from my hand is not perfect !!!! (remember that sisters and brothers )

    [GK] ""but my son you can only pick one ............
    take youre time .....
    walk trough the garden ....watch ,look,..you can even sleep over here..
    spend some time with one rose.......
    before you pick one......

    cause these are not 'just ' roses.......
    they are special ones.....

    Once you have choose one......
    you may toutch her.....
    and when she opens up ........

    it means that she likes you.....
    once you have toutched her ....
    there will be an energie unleased...
    that is called love.......
    and this love...
    will stay unless you keep the Golden rulles...
    and the most inportent one of those rulles ...

    "IS THAT YOU HAVE TO HONOUR ME ABOVE ANYTHING""...

    you will remind and give me honour and praise..that it was i ..
    who gave you the rose and that i brought you to her...


    ""i can do that .......uhhhh .....mmm i mean i think so yeah!!"'

    [S ]"' butta what are the other rulls ?"' (as he scratces his head ..and one eye squeezed)

    [GK]2 -"'after you have plucked her you can take her home...
    but you have to feed the rose...
    love it...
    nurture it like youre own....
    cause you would ""NEVER'' hate youre own flesh...

    than she will grow...she will be in bloom..
    and you will to...
    and you will be as one....

    3- When you will mistread the rose....
    and the flower doesnt bloom..
    and it looks like she is going to hit the ground....

    you will have to bring her back to me......
    i will call you wherever you are....
    and you will have to come back to the garden..
    spend time with me and work..


    [GK] "'Now sunny .........

    do you still want a rose ? ""








    To be continued....
     
  2. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi libertylady :wave:

    i met u 4 the 1st time n chat the other day, & it was a pleasure meeting u.

    thanks 4 sharing ur short story skillz w us, it wuz a nice :read: .

    hope 2 c u n chat again soon.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done sistah lovin the story
     
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    And I wait paitently for the next helping of your beautiful work.
     
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    Sunny in the rose garden

    I've been slugging it out in religion and philosophy mostly. My first love is writing, albeit my focus has been on songs and movie scripting. Nevertheless, the short story has always been a favorite for me. Sunny in the rose garden is a quaint metaphor for me as a man to be mindful of. I know there's more to the story, but having lived a little it comes cler where this story can find its end. If Sunny is typical he's going to have to wind up back in the garden for having failed to do as he was told. We fellas sometimes don't trim and provide what you ladies are most needful for, I'll admit that much. So, while his desires are for roses he is being tasked to choose and care for one. I'm looking forward to seeing how Sunny winds up back in the garden. It just seems it has to be that way, him having to go back. Us fellas are hopeless I suppose.

    Astro...... :weird:
     
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    Sunny in the rose garden (part 2)

    ....

    So sunny was silent and this big frown came on his face...

    [GK] ""and you can not forget me other wise i forget you.... when you
    have a rose..""

    sunny was still silent......

    after a long silents...god said..


    [GK]You know while you are thinking ....you can come and maybe work for me.. i need some help in the garden and by the way i said that you can take youre time to search for a rose...as long as you want....sunny smiled and said..

    ""ok"'

    And so sunny spends day,s and night in the garden....
    He becomes gods gardener in the garden he does good work..
    and get to know more about how everything works....

    One day sunny walks trough the garden....and sees a man bob holding a flower but the flower doesnt open up....
    Than another man bill comes and stands next to bob....and say,s can i try...?
    But than bob says ""I WAS FIRST"' on wich bill responds ""but she doesnt open up"' Than bill responds drastic "'but she is Mine"" and they almost started fighting.....
    Sunny jumps in between and says...""Guys .....you know the golden Rulls? don ya"' Right?? than lord answers ""RIGHT!""
    And they both calmed down...
    than sunny says besides that ..if its gods will...""there is a rose for every man"" Than bill says to sunny.....""dont you wanna give it a try"'
    and sunny responds and says....""no i give bill his time.....and uhh she is a beautifull rose butta not for my eye...."'

    A day later sunny sees bill jumping out of the garden happy holding a beautifull rose in his hands.....and sunny screams after him..""GOOd Luck and remember the golden rulls....""
    Next day sunny walks trough the garden and there are a lot of man walking around....and sunny says to the lord ""its crowdy today lord!"" as lord responds and says.."'Yes sunny a lot of work to do"" ..
    Sunny helps around a lot and becomes a good gardener and separates the man and helps them to remind the golden rulls ...teaches them...and shows them around...
    He also helps the lord with planting some roses back into the ground....
    At night he watches the roses as they shine by the moon.....
    the next day bill comes back and says hi to sunny...and sunny says...
    ""Bill what are you doing here?"" as he responds and say,s ""oh ya know Just checking out some flowers "" ""What !!! sunny responds"" "'were is youre flower !!?,say,s sunny""
    at ....uhh home bill responds ..Sunny gets mad and says....""you should be
    ashamed of yourself!!!

    [GK] ""Yes ! show her to me...



    To be continued........
     
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    :huh: bye the way Hi alkebulan :wave: yeah i saw you in the chatroom...
    it was nice chatting....:heart:
    Rich thanks for the read :heart:
    :spin: and you to sister thatgirl :spin: and welcome to dethee :wave::heart:


    astro.....LOL ....no you alright
    we dont wannamiss ya..

    :censored: lol...

    no i,m serius you alright guys :love:


    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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    :rolleyes: part two is in here people :grouphug:




    (lol promoting my self :star: here......)
     
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