Black Poetry : Sunny Day Within

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful sunny spring day
    sun beaming down upon
    already sun kissed skin
    rays penetrate me within
    permeate my being with
    warmth, let me feel it cascade
    throughout my body til its overflowing
    I want to feel like my entire essence
    is glowing
    and the sun won't dare set on this day
    without knowing
    that I am okay
    fate has sent me this way
    for a particular reason
    and no matter how rainy the season
    the rain does indeed serve a purpose
    preparing me for milder weather
    when sunshine radiates my way
    on a beautiful sunny spring day
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    summer tyme swings in motion
    the sweet flowers blooming about
    and sun rays beaming bright
    the time is here .........nicely expressed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The past few days have felt like summer, sunny rays bringing a sense of warmth. Thank you Rich.
     
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    Yes, spring is surely in the air...I feel it, Inhale it, bathe in it, and just enjoy the wonders of the sun. I like this piece, I felt the spring of it, thanks
     
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    You give us sunshine from sunup to sundown.

    May all of your days be sunny, Watz. :blowkiss:
     
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    .... Sunny days within ... I remember those ... everything smells different, looks different ... feels different ... continue to cause me to close my eyes and see myself in your words ... good write :dance:
     
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    Sweet philosophical approach to the rain, an optimist's touch. :jump:
     
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    thanks for that poem it truly brought a little more sunshine to my day.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you could feel the spring in this piece queent, thank you sis.
    How kind of you to say 1poet. May all your days be sunny as well brotha, thank you.
    Thank you MsMochaB, your words are quite vivid in your poetry, poetess.
    I try to be as optimistic as I can gempis, some days are easier than others. Thank you.
    So nice to know that you saw this scribe in that way Mit Mit. Welcome to destee!!!
     
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    Nothing like a FEEL GOOD poem to pick ones spirits up and brighten up da day :)

    wonderful way to set da vibe sister :)
     
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