Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 15, 2002.
all the slaves gather
struttin 'round the Big House lawn
sippin mint julep
When I read the title, I said, as I was clicking..."There is no way you can paint a plantation scene in 3 lines...this must be a triple versed haiku. When it opened, I was surprised to see that it was indeed...3 lines. And boy did you paint the scene into my vision well. Made me want a julep for real gurl. I ain kiddin' either.
Alyce ya talent is at a whole new level......dis was str8 awesome!
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