Black Haiku : Sundays & Jubilees (Plantation Scene)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 15, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all the slaves gather
    struttin 'round the Big House lawn
    sippin mint julep


    Alyce
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I read the title, I said, as I was clicking..."There is no way you can paint a plantation scene in 3 lines...this must be a triple versed haiku. When it opened, I was surprised to see that it was indeed...3 lines. And boy did you paint the scene into my vision well. Made me want a julep for real gurl. I ain kiddin' either. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce ya talent is at a whole new level......dis was str8 awesome!
     
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