Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sunday morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Aug 11, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listening to my staggerd breathing
    I count to ten, trying to calm down
    i close my eyes and think of that happy place
    books, newspapers, quiet open spaces
    Sundays with you, never wasted.

    lying in bed til 3 in the afternoon
    and baby Monday always came so soon
    but now, Sundays seem so long
    and I am crying through this song

    Wonderin what you are doing
    and who you are doing it with
    and why you're not doing it with me
    jealousy

    Wishin you were back
    Wonderin in fact
    of who you are with
    envy

    You hurt me so much
    can't seem to touch
    myself the same way
    can't have you any day

    will I ever be the same
    always believing its a game
    am i tryin this in vain
    wonderin through the pain

    will i ever be all right
    will i make it through a night
    without turning to see
    if you came home to me

    remembering i locked the door
    i couldn't take it anymore
    never knowing who to trust
    leaving you was a must

    so like Brian McKnight
    Counting the days, hours minutes
    since you left
    feeling so distressed

    not knowing what to do
    lying here I dream about you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Randee dis was well felt ......
    let da world know these feelings
    tyte
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks as always $$RICH$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise
     
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    yeah...i know the feelin...unfortunately :(
    but the flow was still off the chain
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big compliments coming from you
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah i'm with trinit, i really know the feeling. this is a good piece.
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks true

    crazy what we miss
     
  9. elayne.

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    randee...

    mmm mmm mmm... i felt this one from
    my hair follicles to my toe nails!
    heartfelt emotion dripped from every
    word! thank you for sharing.

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    Love it.
     
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