Quiet Poetry Lounge : SUN CYCLE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Jun 6, 2007.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SUN CYCLE

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    The sun cycle, the Aquarius Age. Piscean Era is over.
    Where my soldiers? Use what's in between you ears, your hands and shoulders.

    We got too much to save from the souls of our children to our family from the grave
    can't forget time and money and we have to master trades
    even if you have to masterbate, stay away from those AIDS
    we's free now, brothers stay away from those slaves
    the underground has been raised get paid, get paid!
    unless you're harriet tubman in these last and evil days

    i give praise to black entrepeneurs who get it how they live
    who'd rather recieve paper but, always got something to give

    i could'nt help but, flow this out it makes me wanna shout!
    too much soul to hold it in so i open the dragon's mouth

    no, i don't have dragon breath but, i do spit fire
    i just got my business license so, i don't need to get hired
    i'm also picking up trades on days i'm not that tired
    so i can happily retire and leave my prince an empire

    why should a white man be mad at me?
    he might say he's losing
    well, ******* tell me who's winning
    when i got problems snoozing

    it's so confusing if you ask me,
    i don't know

    but, they say the sun cycle's here
    whatever color, i got to glow!
     
  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Put some heat on it! I did laugh at, " even if you have to masterbate, stay away from those AIDS." But the truth is refreshing. Well Well Done & Keep spitting yo fire!
     
  3. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It usually begins with an awakening...
     
  4. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please explain
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn:
    Your talent, skill, gift, art, ability, is AMAZING!
    I don't even think those words are totally fitting.
    You are such a pleasure to read.


    Much Lu
    v
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being your own boss, and allowing your sun's rays to shine ever so brightly. Shine on, poet.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes poet

    something is going on out there

    i see you "see" something

    time is moving fast, but is it really?

    great piece here

    i didn't point out anything you said here

    because you said it all quite well in your piece

    nice work here

    glad to see you're spiritual warrior

    peace
     
  8. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your very first sentence...
     
  9. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved Precious Sha'iyn:

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  10. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you all

    i am humbled by you all and uplifted at the same time
    thanks for reading my many posts
    i will now slow down on posting
    you all are wonderful black people
    thanks for caring!!!
     
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