Black Poetry : sumthin on my mind…

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Need ta write…
    I got sumthin on my mind…
    Got ta let it out…
    Whys always me….
    Just need ta write I got sum
    thangs on my mind…

    don’t know how ta
    release…
    but I am tryin…
    just sum mixed up
    old
    thoughts…

    awwww…my mind…
    wade heavy ooooh…
    things ya
    say..uhuh..huh…
    the things ya do…
    just need ta write…

    don’t know what ta do..
    need ta release…
    but I cant…
    just
    sum
    thoughts…
    about …
    deep in my mind
    back up from way…
    I need ta write…
    Sumthin
    pressin on my mind…
    don’t know
    what ta do…
    even how ta
    place it
    on paper….
    My mind….shhhsh….
    Just cant…
    Don’t…
    Wont…
    Ooooh my mind…

    Search ma soul and it….
    My mind…
    If it was a law
    I be arrested by now…
    Just need ta write…
    No words ta lay…
    My mind…..
    Wonderin
    Sufferin
    And
    Lost
    If dis should ….
    Got
    sumthin
    on my mind…
    Cant
    Wont
    Tryin…
    Ooooh me…
    My My My
    My Mind….sum
    Thoughts…..yes...

    Need ta write…
    I got sumthin on my mind…
    Got ta let it out…
    Whys always me….
    Just need ta write I got sum
    thangs on my mind…

    a blkangel thang...:kiss:
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flow on sista let ur pen chizzal on
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    relax da mental and bring forth ya thoughts
    as ya pen scribe da script of da mind
    i feel ya here , i've been on this road and still walking it
    Releaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am cool..
    thank for the read BaduX,$$RICH$$
    it be like that at times....
    sum thin on my mind......
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool.. let it flow Blkangel.. Sooth your mind. Let it flow.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you HODEE
    dig dat but i am cool..
    just sum thin on my mind...
    dont know how to let it go...
    thanks for the read...
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautiful...just let it flow...get it off your mind girl...believe me i know how it is.
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what!! YOU the POETESS supreme cant get it off her mind...:) let that pen do what u make it do gurllll and flow...I know u can :)
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dig dat lol...
    just lost a flow dont got a vibe its
    been a while...
    but tryin to come though...
    I got sumthin on my mind…
    Got ta let it out…
    Whys always me….
    Just need ta write I got sum
    thangs on my mind…
    true love and triniti424
    thanks for the read
    and lovin support
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

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    lovin' the flow of this...
     
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