Black Poetry : Summer Tyme

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in the brisk of night
    the warmth
    from the heated day
    sweat roll
    bodies fold
    stories told
    summer feast
    a treat of som'em cold
    as ya mind stroll
    cross sandy fields
    water waves stroke
    ya inner motions
    leaving a quick drinch
    yet dry
    so fast
    so long
    da day
    has ended
    another hot *** day ahead

    summer summer summer tyme!!!

    Heatstroke
    heatwave
    rosted cook
    to a choco broil
    dry lips crackle
    from every word
    no chap stick
    only VASELINE
    **** it's hot!!!!:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    every curb wheels scream
    music loud
    honeies in da mini's
    bruthas eyez poppin'
    bodies rockin'
    skin 2 skin
    touching wit no movement...............To be continued !:eek:
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could have a little bit of that summer bro' its in the middle of winter here in SA and I'm freezinggggggggg:) :eek: :D :rolleyes: :maddd:
     
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    Excellent summertyme jont Flyte!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$rich-ne$$.


    this piece has me ova here laughin' to myself.

    seems like everyone i talk to these days...
    no matter where they are in the country the
    sentiment is the same... "it's hot as hell!!"

    i enjoyed your glimpse of summer tyme. :)

    :heart: ,
    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey lo get ova here where i am yo butt will burn up!!!

    GQ... man when da heat cum down so dose my belongings!

    sunshyne.... gurl it dat tyme of da year u know

    THANKZ FAMILY 4 DA READ .................word up!
     
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    $Rich$

    I ain't even complainin...
    its my time of year....I love Summertime!

    keep flowin....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    hey epip!! gurl it get like a heat wave round here but
    when it get cold wooooweeee!! enjoy ya summer sistah
     
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    Richy Rich

    need some cool water? :lol:

    tight flow

    pd
     
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    this. is da joint! Had me bobbing my head- I love how you use short lines to create a rapid fire kind-a funky beat. Loved it.

    JAH Lives.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man

    you gone make me break out my short shorts and my tank tops with this here!!!!!!!!!!!!




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