Black Poetry : Summer Rain

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  1. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once upon a summers day. The finest weather turned to rain. A lady walked with her man.
    In the park they did stand.
    Though they were hot and full of fire.
    They were also filled with desire.
    It burned deep down in their blood so heated.
    That they didn`t take the time to be seated.
    As the drizzle, dropped on their scorching skin.
    You could hear the sizzle resound within.
    Off came all their clothes. Out came his firemans hose.
    Her furnace so, hot she couldn`t wait.
    The ecstacy so fine he loved the taste.

    They made love in the mist.
    Oh my, oh my, what a kiss.
    He stoked her flames, and kept them hot.
    She stroked him back and took the shot.
    As their bodies trembled in unison.
    They waited a few moments.... to do it again!!!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO DESTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):heart::)

    this is a wonderful scribe...i'm lovin' it...
     
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    lol! Ah! I did'nt think anyone saw! lol! this is very hot!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very heated passion
    nice flow
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH! SH**, This was Hot man! Tyte!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayummmmm

    whew, is it just me or is it hot in here!!!:hot: :hot: :hot:

    WELCOME TO DESTEE,
    HOPE U LIKE UR STAY HERE!!!:D

    much luv,
    -story
     
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    :eek: :jawdrop: ....well damm.....:hot:


    Welcome to Destees!!!!!
    :wave:
     
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    "What imagery"

    They made love in the mist. (nice)
     
  9. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks every one

    thanks for the Mad Love
     
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