Black Poetry : Summer Rain

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drip, Drop drip drip

    I wish the rain would never stop
    as I am
    Taken my mind on a Metnal Mystery
    Going thru My Past Files in the back of
    My brain
    Wondering...
    Who was I back then?
    Was I this gawdy, naive little girl?....
    I go back an remember the first time.....
    I sat on his front steps.....
    Talked to him for 3 hours straight about cartoons....;)
    Broke down and cried cuz I got dumped.(by his cousin)....:(
    The summer when everythang was "Sweet Sixteen"
    Trees swayed and the block was Hot!!!
    I go back and remember.......
    Me and my best friend chattin with his boy....
    Me being the go in between...
    Going to Six Flags as a group........
    How we all were carefree ......
    Howme and him hugged........
    How we firsr kissed in a summer rain.........

    Kinda like this one....

    Looking at that picture now......
    I wish I had a time Machine.......
    So that just maybe for once I could change
    My past..
    And Maybe my best friends.....

    .......

    Maybe Our hearts wouldn't be broken now.....

    I wish the rain would never stop....but soon it will

    Drip
    Drop..

    ...drip.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REMINISCE

    No time like the present can rain on our parade-

    I'm feeling you! :rolleyes:
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep thought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    allowing da mental to flow in da memories
    of yesteryears and know da warmth of the
    rain drops dat fall ..........so clear sweet thoughts !
     
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    Sweet...I like the flow on this one...only if we could all go back to those days...what would we be now?
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico, is that was the case, I would have been what a shoulda stayed ..( a virgin)
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is true..but you didn't so now you know what the future holds. Just be careful next time..
     
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    Very Nice....I love the title Summer Rain...It just holds so much meaning :)
     
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    ah yeah, the rain and journeys down
    memory lane.
    feelin' ya flow!
     
  10. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt piece I felt you thru each and every part so beautiful your poetry is thanks for putting this one down until next time

    keep flowin
     
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