Black Poetry : Summer Rain PT. 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, May 19, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Summer rain cooling rain
    inviting me to run
    dance and play.
    Rain drops that
    give cool relief
    and soothing
    calm.
    "Splish" mind off worries
    "Splash" forgetting my troubles
    watching the rain chase
    my blues away.
    Summer rain which leaves
    behind fresh scents and sunshine.
    entice my minds eye.
    I see beautiful flowers in
    places that are concrete.
    I hear wonderful music in
    the sounds of the busy street.
    How easily my perspective is
    changed after
    a cooling cleansing
    summer rain.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another a-one drop. nice piece :geek:
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks TheOne. I was inspirered by our other than sunny morning.
     
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    "Singin in the rain"....
    of this wonderful flow...

    Very nice Sister
     
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    What a refreshing scribe, definitely makes one think about a cool rain shower, very nice.
     
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