Black Poetry : summer of da weepin' rain "

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Summer lovin
    had me at last
    things could never
    go badly wrong
    daily i sing dis song

    if da heart be true
    and love be strong
    for da mist if it come
    da weepin rain will
    be change
    by my love in sunshine
    again

    u & i close warm friendz
    from every drop of rain
    ya name is whispered
    gently cross da colors
    of the bow unto the end
    is a wish to be fulfilled

    I know i love u
    my humble soul
    cry da drops
    pumped from my
    heart of love to u
    sunshine bright
    skies fill in water
    da windz weep
    and da land rumbles

    will u love me back?
    can u hold me just this once?
    my affection is blissful
    my lips part to kiss u
    my tongue twist in motion
    heart in rapid thump!

    summer weepin' rain
    as the fan blow da
    moist breeze
    the dampness not of sweat
    but the nibbles n' bites of rain

    I want u !!!!!
    will u cum ?
    be my love of flyte
    hold my hand tonight
    as our bodies enterwined
    and music made in da motion
    of love clashing ur my destiny
    that i desire and lone to have
    will u cum !?

    how long do i wait !!!!!:eek:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew.......i like this!!! alot.......tyte...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz my mind is in motion , thoughts on things
    so my pen speak for me today..........................
     
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    i ask that question every day

    will you cum
    or stand there
    not aware
    of the true feelings i feel
    for you
    i need you
    to really realize
    my eyes
    are for none
    but you
    how can i explain
    to you
    that my heart pounds when
    i see you
    do you feel the same way
    as i do
    i hope you do
    cause the summer is burning
    and so is my love
    for you...

    the master of flight
    gives love's true insight
    this was ill rich
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out da poet of da week droppin' mad skillz here
    thankz 4 da flow .......i like dat tyte big 13*
     
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    so we ask again myself & Khasm
    how long do we wait !?
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya did it again, $$RICH$$. The title alone is almost beautiful enough to be a poem by itself. ;)
     
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    this was so moving, I just imagined a tranquil, rainy day of
    lovemakin in the summer............oooh, this was sweet!

    (summer weepin' rain
    as the fan blow da
    moist breeze
    the dampness not of sweat
    but the nibbles n' bites of rain)

    mmmmmmmmm...............
     
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    the summer rain of $$RICH$$ is again in madd flyte :toast:
    TYTE!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "u & i close warm friendz
    from every drop of rain
    ya name is whispered
    gently cross da colors
    of the bow unto the end
    is a wish to be fulfilled"

    ahhhh beautiful...
    I's love me some poetry!

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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