Black Poetry : Summer Of An Weeping Rain

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As life unfold
    to da story yet told
    summer maze
    glaze in da aftermath
    of weeping rain
    as it hit wit drops
    to fill a well
    my heart falls short
    to compell da joy

    weeping tears
    cast down upon
    my very soul
    madness sets in
    yet da smile sits
    half staff
    a million tymes
    i seek out how!
    and come short of
    an answer

    where da i go from here !?:confused: :(
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ you know I would give anything to know the answer to that one and I would sure as hell share it with you my brother, but what I do know is who knows and if you trust in him soon you too will know. When all else is done and all you can do is stand
    STAND MY BROTHER STAND
    You and your family are still in our prayers
     
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    VERY NICE.....
    as it hit wit drops
    to fill a well
    my heart falls short
    to compell da joy

    I LIKED DAT PART.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz shaz u know i have da faith and trust in him to comfort
    my mind body & soul so i stand again wit honor but a sad one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every tear that drops
    is a ova flow of rain
    filling da well..............Thankz LURK
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEA YEA---GOTTA GIV PROPS--ESPECIALLY
    WHEN PROPS ARE DUE.......!!!
     
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    to da Fatha
    my soul screams out a fierce holla
    above me He stand talla ...... don't know Rich, don't know to the Father is the only place were i find ........ sunshine even in the rain because the reality of thangs just seem insain, destorted and disdained ..... God's love soon makes it plain
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice piece. Keep up da good work rich!:)

    Much luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    herlove... surely i look to which my help cometh from
    thanks as u asure me dis is his way and he knoweth
    all and soon will comfort da pain

    Aaliyahmonet.....Thankz baby gurl ya always on tyme
     
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