Black Poetry : Summation of a Relation

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  1. robryant1106

    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    I had this man that's so good, that when we would make love
    The angels were sing'n from heaven above
    He'd hold me real close and say in my ear
    The sweetest [email protected] things that you ever did hear
    Gently kiss'n my neck and rub'n my back
    Tell'n me that he loved me and stuff like that :luvv:

    Sometimes we would *****; you know, flip the script
    That felt real good too; had me goin' "ooh sh*t
    Spank'n my @ss and lick'n and stuff
    This man was real freaky, ummm ummm sho' nuff
    Bang'n and strokin' me till my toes bent
    Uhm, hold up y'all--I'm havin' a moment :tongue3:

    We'd go out on dates, and just talk for hours
    Sometimes for no reason, he'd give me some flowers
    He'd call me at work just to say that he missed me
    And when I got home, best believe that he kissed me :kiss:

    But then things got bad; things just couldn't get worse
    He got strung out on crack; tried to go in my purse
    Started lyin' and sneakin' and runnin' the street
    And all of a sudden he wasn't so sweet :maddd:

    I'd be cuss'n and fuss'n and cryin' and sh*t
    Goin' thru all kinds of hell 'cause he want him a hit
    We'd break up and make up; he gone then he back
    I started to wonder which one of us on crack :nuts:

    It don't make no sense to go thru this sh*t
    So finally I said, "Gotdammit, that's it!!" :getout:
    I ended this thing and then thought, "what's next?"
    What am I gon' do when I want me some sex

    But then I remember the hell I went thru
    I know to stay peaceful what I gotta do
    Remind myself that endin' this was a blessin'
    And as for the sex, there's always self-expression :tongue:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    exotic erotic deep hot flow
    leting da feeling go tyte drop
    i hear ya
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering how it was is bittersweet, but you flipped the script so that you didn't sound sad, but enpowered. Flow on.
     
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    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your comments Rich and Watz :D
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all do things we dont want to do but to better our self we have to let go of whats destorying us to climb higher very nice poem from beginning to end
    the growth of one to peace....Angel
     
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