Black Poetry : suicide thought

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mafiamami, May 14, 2003.

  1. mafiamami

    mafiamami Member MEMBER

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    For a moment last september I had this thought on my mind I just wanted to share..

    Inside myself formerly, I was dying
    Unravelling in the belly of myself
    selfish.. devil whispers not silenced
    a Putrid hunger I almost devoured
    myself alive.
    I thought your love to be a miracle worker
    a healer of ills
    now thoughts of you have me popping pills to ease
    the pain
    that remains.
    Inside myself formerly
    now diving into a hell portal
    not able to call
    at all
    S.O.S.
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate...definitely followed your piece...thanks for sharing.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep and heartfelt...loved it...
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADY IN DISTRESS

    It hurts to be misled to the point of no return.

    You've expressed such pain, which promises hope...

    Your expressions are those that have been there,

    done at, and survived. Such writing is deserving of praise!





    1poetsought ~
     
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